The bar graph illustrates the ratio of hospital beds per thousand of the population in 8 different countries. The table depicts the governmental expenditure on healthcare and the average number of years old per person in Japan, the Netherlands, and the US.
Overall, it can be seen that Japan is the leading nation in terms of investing in facilities in hospitals. Meanwhile, this country also has the longest life expectancy despite only small money allocated to each citizen by the national authorities.
Standing at the first place regarding healthcare resources is Japan, with 14 hospital beds per thousand of the population. This figure nearly doubles that of Germany, with 8 units. For the other nations, the average number of beds are equipped in hospitals is 4 beds per thousand of the population.
In terms of the government's budget for health problems, Japan, the Netherlands, and the US spend 2.58, 3.48, 6.72 dollars per individual on healthcare. However, there are significant reverses in the average life expectancy in the 3 examined subjects. While allocating the highest amount of the governmental fund, American people live average 78 years old, which is also the lowest rank. The opposite was true for Japanese with 83 years old.
- The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- the chart below show the percentage of male and female students getting top grades in 1960 and 2000 Summarise and information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Some people believe laws change human behavior Do you agree with it 92
- Some people say that the current level of air travel is acceptable where as other people believe air travel should be reduced and the government should play a role in this Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 78
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16256157635 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88140707537 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600985221675 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4232634779 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2727272727 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110179394729 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409309311918 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484918951612 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664005278114 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246427608146 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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