The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.
The given bar chart illustrates the population of Japan. The table shows the elderly population of Japan and the percentage of total older people in Japan over the period of 105 years.
Overall, it is clear that while the number of Japanese people always increases most of the time, and only decreases from 2005 to 2055. While it predicts that the number of elderly Japanese was the highest in 2035. But the percentage of people in Japan who are over 60 will be the highest in 2050.
Looking at the bar chart, Japan's population started at 84,1 million then significantly went up to 121 million in 1985. Then, it continued to increase significantly, around 127. 8 million in 2005 before slightly declining to 125,4 in 2015 and predicted to dramatically decrease to 89,9 in 2055.
According to the table, there were 4.1 people over 65 years of age in1950 and accounted for 4.9% of the population. The number of the older population will be predicted to rise rapidly to 37.3 million at 34.0% of citizens in 2035 before decreasing slightly at 36.5 million and accounting for 41.0% of residents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., and only decreases from 2005 to 2055. While it predicts that the number of elderly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83068783069 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64955245577 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550264550265 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6227207546 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148169541222 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679842914927 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913693400107 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107880812726 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110341529902 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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