the chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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the chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The charts illustrate data regarding population changes in japan over one hundred and five years between 1950 and 2055.

Overall, while the number of Japanese rose consistently over half of the years shown, it is projected to markedly decrease in the future years. In contrast, the percentage of elderly people is estimated to continue on the increase.

looking more closely at the details, in 1950, both total population and the number of persons over 65 years were at their lowest, at 84.1 million and 4.1 million (4.9% of total population) respectively. From this point, the latter went up steadily during the period, reaching 127.8 million in 2005, which was the highest number recorded. However, figures started to go down gradually over the next ten years and they are expected to see much sharper falls in 2035 (11 million) and 2055 (89.9 million).

If we look at the elderly, there was a near five-fold growth in their population in 2005, at 25.7 million, which was 20% of the total population. this figure is predicted to group in 2035 (34%) and despite a forecast drop by 700 thousand, the proportion of senior citizens of japan is estimated to rise to 41% in 2055.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85572139303 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54182605251 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621890547264 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.542629884 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0647003111867 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288398061977 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030458779108 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452615038943 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337742504657 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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