The percentage of the women aged under 30 having their first child dropped, while those aged over 30 saw an increased. It is also notice able that the oldest age made up the lowest percentage of the women giving birth to their first child.
In 1966, the 19-to24-year-olds made up about 62% of the total number of the first-time mothers, compare to 36% of those aged 25-30. In the next 40 years, there was a significant drop to 28% in 29-24 age group in its proportion of women having their first child, while those aged 25-30 rised dramatically to 50% before decreasing suddenly to 38% in 2006. Similarly, the percentage of the youngest people fell considerably from 34% to 12% during the period shown.
Turning to the others, from 1966 to 2006, the 30-34 age bracket recorded an enormous climb between 14% and 45% in its proportion of the first-time mothers. Likewise, the 34-to-39-year-olds accounted for 8% of the total number of women having their first child, compared to 3% of those aged over 40. Over the following 40 years, the percentage of women aged 34-39 who gave birth to their first child grew gradually to 30% in comparison with 5% in those oldest age group
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 67
- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town 78
- The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organizations 73
- The diagram below describes how stormwater is recycled in an Australian city 11
- The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003 2006 and 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'noticed'.
Suggestion: noticed
...ed over 30 saw an increased. It is also notice able that the oldest age made up the lo...
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Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e 19-to24-year-olds made up about 62% of the total number of the first-time mothe...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arison with 5% in those oldest age group
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, likewise, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71359223301 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70067439552 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538834951456 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3256463887 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30437044122 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156300649205 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771849196314 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239083097252 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426240590732 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.