The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
The chart illustrates the percentage of females in terms of six different age groups, who gave birth to their first child between 1966, 1986 and 2006.
Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of young adults group decreased in the years given, while this trend is converted in the older age groups. From the database, most women gave birth to their first child when they were from 20 to 34 years old.
In 1996, the 20-24 years old group had the highest percentage of women, which was above 60%, whereas, the middle age group had the least percentage of women who gave birth their first child. The 25-30 years old group and 19 and under group had a similar proportion of women, at around 35%. There was only 13% of women between 30-34 years old decided to have their first child, which was approximately 7% higher than the 34 to 39 ages group.
In the next 40 years, there was a significant fall in the number of young females when it came to giving birth to their first baby. By contrast, women who were in the middle increase significantly. Likewise, a considerable rise in the number of women from 25 to 30 years old to 52% in 1986, before dropped to around 43% at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
... of young adults group decreased in the years given, while this trend is converted in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46818181818 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29164400189 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.219943845 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328278663482 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14564844965 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11406459239 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229639856317 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849332813705 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.