The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
The bar chart describes the percentage of Australian women who had their first child in terms of their age ranges between 1966 and 2006.
Overall, the rate of women aged under 24 having their first child was on the decrease, while the opposite was true for that of women aged from 30 to 39 in Australia. Also, the female aged over 40 tended to give no more birth during the period.
In 1966, the highest birth rate was recorded in 19-to-24-year-old women, over 60%, which was almost double that of the female under 19 years old. Over the next 40 years, birth rates of the former and the latter age ranges experienced an overly twofold drop to bottom out at about 28% and 12%, respectively, in 2006.
By contrast, the equivalent figures for 30-34 and 34-39 year olds increased after standing at around 13% and 8% in turn in 1966 and peaked at roughly 45% and 30% in order in 2006. Meanwhile, 36% of 25-to-30-year-old women had their first baby in 1966 and the birth rate of those rose to peak at 50% in 1986 before dropping. However, that of women aged over 40 was negligible throughout the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ian women who had their first child from different age ranges between 1966 and 20...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to 39 in Australia. Also, the figure for first-time mothers aged over 40 was the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74111675127 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61595230704 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568527918782 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3193565727 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279026994404 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135548433056 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777700667964 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198895891022 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665965770214 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.