The chart below gives information about global sales of games software CDs and DVD or video

The bar graph provides information about how sales of games software, CDs and DVD/video have changed at billion dollars from 2000 to 2003.

To begin with it can be clearly seen that games software and DVD/video had more sales at the end of given period of time compared to the beginning. Games software sales were gradually rise from nearly 15 billion $ to about 20 billion $ whereas DVD/video had most significant raise to just over 30 billion $ at same duration.

To continue with, when it comes to sales of CDs, it was the only category which experiences a drop in sales. Although there was a gentle decline, the sales fell between 2000 and 2003 from 35 billion $ to approximately 30 billion $.

In conclusion, it is understood from graph that games software and DVD/video sales are increasing year by year. In spite of the popularity of CDs are decreasing, it still has the highest sales rate at the ending.

Total words: 162

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...ware, CDs and DVD/video have changed at billion dollars from 2000 to 2003. To begin ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ideo had more sales at the end of given period of time compared to the beginning. Games softwa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...ng. Games software sales were gradually rise from nearly 15 billion $ to about 20 bi...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, whereas, in conclusion, in spite of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86875 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59507197025 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8940485715 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334744233834 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143260222042 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966385085605 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219903683798 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082324245212 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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