The chart below gives the information about the percentage of the adult population who were overweight in four different counties in 1980, 1990 and 2000. ( Figures are given for the years, or nearest year available. )
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the information about the proportion of obese youngsters populace in for various regions ( Japan, Finland, Australia and USA ) during 1980 and 2000. Percentage were measured in units
In overall, USA constituted a major for overweight adults population since obese young ones were least in Japan over the period.
It can be seen from the information that Japan attained a minimum figure of youngsters who become suffering from obesity in given three years. In contrast, the proportion of Japan overweight adults remained relatively constant at nearly 3% between 1980 and 1990 where it slightly raised at around one in twenty during 2000. Furthermore, the amount of obese young ones were found 12%, 10% and 8% respectively from 2000, 1990 and 1980 in Finland.
The graph further proves that a majority of adults population who were overweight and living in USA. Likewise, in 1980 the percentage of obese young people accounted less than a fifth ( 15% ) in America whilst it increased dramatically and reached to peak at about more than a third ( 35% ) between 2000 and noticed a quarter during 1990. Interestingly, populace of Australia overweight adults can be observed at 8% in 1980. Lastly, the amount of fat youngsters population who from Australia can be noticed at one in ten in 1990 and it accounted at double ( 20% ) between 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, likewise, third, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07174887892 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76815674945 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515695067265 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3690429733 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270964983319 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123739370382 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301276084952 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173809572107 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269785822871 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.