The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emission in different countries during three different years.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the information about the quantity of releasing carbon in six various regions ( USA, Germany, United Kingdom, China, Canada and India ) from 1975 to 2005. Units were measured in a thousand metric tonnes.
In overall, USA constituted a major for emissions of carbon dioxide followed by China since United Kingdom and Canada released least amount of carbon over the period.
It can be seen from the information that USA attained a highest figure for carbon emission during the given time which accounted at 1,200,000 in 1975 and it increased dramatically and reached to peak with 1,600,000 between remained years. In addition to this, China was the second most popular country for releasing carbon as it noticed between 400,000 and over 200,000 from 1975 to 1990 as well as it rose gradually with the passage of time at nearly 1,600,000 in 2005. Interestingly, the amount of carbon emission in Germany remained relatively constant at around 250,000 in 1975 and 1990 and dropped at 200,000 between 2005.
The graph further proves that two nations China and Canada can be observed lowest for released carbon. Likewise, between 1975 and 2005, the quantity of carbon emission by China and Canada showed relatively similar at approximately 200,000. Lastly, the amount of India for releasing carbon was found at nearly 400,000 and less than 200,000 respectively between 2005, 1990 and 1975.
- Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police or military force such as the army. While others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, likewise, second, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18859649123 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55546355235 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517543859649 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.907551556 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.444444444 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120456634163 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636023198201 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314634891068 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867371040162 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00549998032352 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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