The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates, the data of peoples science qualification in Malaysia and Singapore. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall, it is clear from that, majority of Malaysians are absent of academic knowledge in science. While, both countries has relatively same amount of people has master degree in science too.
In Malaysia, approximately 65 % of people does not have science knowledge which is about five percentage higher than Singapore. Singapore consist of 60% of no qualified science personal. Whereas, regarding bachelor degree, about 10 % of people from malaysia has graduation in science in turns of Singapore, which is 20%.
In terms of school leaving exam in Malaysia and Singapore accounts for about 35% and 30 % respectively. Whilst, nearly five percentage of peoples in both countries have masters degree in science over the period given. Moreover , Singaporeans makes up bachelor degree holders account only higher than Malaysia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: consists
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58904109589 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94455429564 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.608565151 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116774090291 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478302964993 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336405887972 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746864993963 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235495038372 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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