The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a debatable thought that, one government would be enough for worldwide instead of, individual government in each nation. In this essay explain about the prons and cons of cosmocracy in terms of humanity, employment, financial, and economics.
It is often thinks that, global governance could elaborate humanitarian consideration to common people without discriminations in colour, race , and cultural variations. Likewise, it would be mitigate the development in all areas irrespective of developed and undeveloped countries. For instance, Somaliya is one of the major country which undergo minimal education, poor advancement in medical physical and financial status. Such countries would be surpass the crisis through the world government distribution of rules, regulations and jurisdiction. In other words, world government would minimise the financial crisis and employment problems in many countries. Some countries with mere population might distribute qualified personnel from other countries and resources would export to other countries without delay of various national boundaries and individual laws.
On the other hand, world government would be reduce the resources development and economic enhancement of distribution and assimilation of justice. For example, many empowerment of laws and innovative developmental ideas would reach to the common people might take years to implement. Besides, trades and economic crisis would be escalate due to the insufficient knowledge of actual problems and exact needs of the communities around the world.All in one government policies would have many parliamentary dispute in terms of language and understanding as well.
Put in a nutshell, world government would have many benefits in global development and educational environment in many ways, which would advance the standards of everyone. However, there are lot of implementation insufficiency in large basis , which would be deplete the sustainability of people around the whole world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, likewise, so, well, for example, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90034364261 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22924613678 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8651780591 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.076923077 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230017867541 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905398642953 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656878115698 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157548203358 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508163577212 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.