The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the amount of money earning from exports in Someland in two years 2005 and 2015 which put together a plan for 2025.
Overall, while meat and dairy products have generated more revenue since 2005, international tourism sectors is planned to reach the highest amount of money gaining from exports. Besides all sectors will increase from year to year.
It is obviously seen in the chart that, meat products in 2005 was larger exports than other years, about 4 billions USD. However, this figure reduced stably in 2015 by about 1 billions USD. In sharp contrast, The dairy products was exported in 2015 was over 8 billions dollar which was far higher than this figure in 2005 with nearly 4.5 billions dollar. At the same period of time, International tourism witnessed a decrease while the money in this section reduce from nearly 6.5 billions dollar to just slightly over 6 billions dollar.
According to future projection, the international tourism will gain the top position with around 8 billions USD in 2025. This sectors is estimated to follow by dairy products with over 8.5 billions dollar. The meat products is planned to take the bottom position with nearly 3.5 billion dollar which will be a half of dairy products exporting in 2025.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95327102804 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42117410047 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528037383178 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1666537967 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101258866202 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518356730093 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528766977679 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786790467171 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608096902481 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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