The bar chart compares and contrasts the changes in data of three main categories exporting of Someland, namely: meat products, dairy products, and international tourism in 2005, 2015 and a prediction for 2015, measured by billion USD.
Generally speaking, the exports of these three types of demands increased over the same period of time, with an exception of meat products.
A closer look at the diagram shows a great investment in dairy products with the highest figures at roughly 8 billion USD in 2015, which was far more greater than that of in 2005 and 2025 with 5.5 and 6.3 billion USD respectively. The meat products, with the lowest investment, however, experienced a gradual annual decrease from 4 billion USD to the forecasted figure of 3 billion USD in 2025. A further point to note is the needs of travel abroad was slightly rose from over 6 billion USD to 7 billion USD in the first ten years, and then 2025 is anticipated to witness an increase to approximately 8 billion USD which is the same as that of dairy products in 2015.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ypes of demands increased over the same period of time, with an exception of meat products. ...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'greater' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: greater
...ly 8 billion USD in 2015, which was far more greater than that of in 2005 and 2025 with 5.5 ...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...the needs of travel abroad was slightly rose from over 6 billion USD to 7 billion US...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74863387978 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71412574233 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579234972678 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1829238659 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.8 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100341287819 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626607268312 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057225447508 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811261630657 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633289889589 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.