The bar chart illustrates Southland's three major exports industries in 2000 and 2015. It also indicates future projections for 2025. As can be seen, International tourism will become the highest industry, although dairy products will remian strong.
To specfy, in 2000, there was the biggest export earn in International tourism industy with £8 billion, followed by Dairy products and Meat products £7 billion and £ 6 billion respectively. To be more precise, in now 2015, Dairy products has a significant rose to £10 billion, this meant it has the greatest exports of three industries. To co...
Votes
Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: eddysuaib
Essay Categories
Essays by the user:
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 83
- The chart below gives the information about Southland s main exports in 2000 2014 and future projections for 2025 77
- some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree? Use specific reasons and examples to suppport your ans 60
- The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 68
Dairy products has a significant rose to £10 billion,
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
less much than
much less than
Sentence: As can be seen, International tourism will become the highest industry, although dairy products will remian strong.
Error: remian Suggestion: remain
Sentence: To specfy, in 2000, there was the biggest export earn in International tourism industy with ?8 billion, followed by Dairy products and Meat products ?7 billion and ? 6 billion respectively.
Error: industy Suggestion: industry
Error: specfy Suggestion: specify
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 160 200
No. of Characters: 802 1000
No. of Different Words: 97 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.557 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.012 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.842 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.177 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.443 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.679 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4