The chart below gives information about Southland s main exports in 2000 20 and future projections for 2025

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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000,20..,and future projections for 2025

The chart demonstrates about Southland's main exports in 2000,2021 and future projections for 2025.
Overall,the major exports in Southland are seen changing over the period.
It is clear from the chart that were the main exports in 2000,at present,it is dairy products and by 2025,it would change to international tourism.Meat products worth 6 million pounds we exported from the area in 2000,which is seen declined by 0.4 billion now and is set to decline further to a point of 5 billion in 2025.
Almost,10 biĺlion pounds of dairy products are being exported from Southland,which grew by 3 billion compared to the export value of 2000.
In addition,the chart shows the future prediction of exports in 2025 as well where the international tourism will peak at nearly 10 billion.Then the diary product will become the second highest with the total earning at about 9.5 billiom and the minority product is meart that forecasted will decrease at only 5 billion.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, then, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10759493671 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89531194814 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.69885004 43.030603864 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.4 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320036108553 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228894175821 0.103423049105 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203704591283 0.0843802449381 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228894175821 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203704591283 0.0819641961636 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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