The chart below gives information about southland's main export in 2000 and 2018 and future projection for 2025.

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The chart below gives information about southland's main export in 2000 and 2018 and future projection for 2025.

The vertical chart reveals the information about main export by southland's in the year 2000, 2018 and future projection for 2025.The data is calibrated in billions. It is clear and coherent representation.
it can be seen that in terms of international tourism the main export in 2000 was slightly above 8 million whereas, in 2018 it has shown minor incline of approximately 9 billion. similarly, International tourism will be showed 10 million exports in the year 2025. Moreover in terms of dairy products 7 billions had been showed by the year 2000 while in 2018 it has been shown a great incline and reach at the highest peak in 2018 by the ratio of 10 billion approximately.
As far as trend was concerned dairy products export will be above 9 billions in the year 2025 likewise, meat products started at 6 billion in the year 2000 but, after the year of 2000 it has been showed a decline ratio of half billion in 2018. Meanwhile, In 2025 dairy products exports will be showed the continuous ratio.
Overall it is evident that maximum exports has been shown in dairy products in 2018 while, minimum will be showed in the year of 2025 by meat products.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68137254902 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70465214291 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46568627451 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2725056973 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.375 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268543900737 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143513394159 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160581276565 0.0843802449381 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215558634838 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166494884959 0.0819641961636 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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