The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2019 and future projections for 2025.

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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2019 and future projections for 2025.

he bar graph compares the three Southland's main exports in 2000, 2019 and with predicted figures in 2025. Units are measured in billions of pound sterlings (£).

Overall, international tourism is the highest source of revenue over the period given, while meat products are the lowest earning exports.

In 2000, international tourism generated by far the biggest earning at approximately £8 billion whereas the lowest were meat products at £6 billion. However, this year dairy product has become the leading main exports which earnings grew by about £3 billion to nearly £10 billion and meat products remained to have the least generated revenue at roughly £5.7billion.

By 2025, international tourism is predicted to peak its earning at almost £10 billion to become the highest income generating export. Revenue from meat products will decrease to a low of £5 billion while a slight drop of around £2 billion could be seen on dairy products.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he bar graph compares the three Southlands...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32026143791 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65299906382 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4371420661 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110431668983 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626719714278 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873920659432 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820076458168 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823662956771 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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