The chart below gives information about the types of media that people in different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram details information about the types of media that people in different age groups used to update daily news in a specific country in 2011.
Overall, radio was used by most people in different age groups, except people aged 10-17 who had tendency to use social platforms to get daily news. It is also noticeable that micro-blogging was less chosen by almost all people in different age groups.
Regarding the percentage of people using radio to update news everyday, people aged 30-49 and 50-64 shared the same figure, at 95%, followed by people in the 18-29 age bracket with the figure being recorded at 94, ahead of people who were over 65 at 88% and lastly 10-17 year-old people (40%).
Turning to the remaining platforms, 80% of people who were 10-17 year-olds and 18-29 year-olds utilized social networking to catch up with the daily information. When people got older, they lost their interest in using social networking to get daily news with 45% for people aged 30-49 year-olds, 33% for people in the 50-64 age bracket and 10% for over 65 year-old people. In terms of micro-blogging ,20% and 25% of people in 10-17 and 18-19 year-old bracket used micro-blogging to update daily news and the total percentage of people using micro-blogging to get news every day from 30-39 to over 65 year-olds was recorded at 31% with the respective figure being 13%, 8% and 2%
- Some groups of people have benefited from modern communication technology However some think they do not have any benefit from this To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The bar chart below shows the popularity of well known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- It is important for everyone including young people to save money for their future To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad Despite knowing that millions of people engage in unhealthy activities What is the cause of this What can be done 89
- Some people believe that in a city the best way to travel is by car while other people argue that bicycles are a better way of travelling in a city 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ge of people using radio to update news everyday, people aged 30-49 and 50-64 shared the...
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Line 7, column 401, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r-old people. In terms of micro-blogging ,20% and 25% of people in 10-17 and 18-19...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55717751421 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487394957983 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4808557014 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.142857143 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244209664428 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160098160889 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125770332406 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219628230377 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133025247399 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.