The chart below gives information about the UK's ageing population in 1985 and makes predictions for 2035.

The bar graph provides processed data which illustrates comparison between five countries' eardely citizens in 1985 and a prediction of the same information in 2035. Overall, Wales recorded the highest number of eardely individuals in both given years and also, the population of citizens across all stated nations, within the age bracket is shown to increase over the 50 years margin.

In 1985, Northern Ireland recorded about 12% which has the smallest population of eardely of all nations, as compared to Scotland and England that showed a slight increase of 14% and 15% respectively. The same trend in ranking is seen in the future analysis made, citing that Northern Ireland would double to 24%, closing up to Scotland at 25% and leaving England with an 8% increase.

Wales, which accounted for the majority of individuals between 65 years and above, shows a 10% growth in 2035 as compared to the 16% mark in 1985 which slightly comes close to the United Kingdom's information of 15% in 1985 and 23% acceleration in 2035.The UK's reading is not only the same with that of Wales in 1985 but also the same in the forecast of 2035.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...5% in 1985 and 23% acceleration in 2035.The UKs reading is not only the same with t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275229357798 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.114678899083 0.116061578633 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0412844036697 0.0759168565197 54% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045871559633 0.0366838410393 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.155963302752 0.155750635184 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0504587155963 0.0379272487307 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6012344086 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0275229357798 0.0210936926555 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0045871559633 0.00175180941692 262% => OK
Determiners: 0.105504587156 0.0948980150116 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0045871559633 0.00437022459523 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0229357798165 0.00967000014798 237% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1135.0 1161.00487805 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.9 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85051546392 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345360824742 0.337110787985 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278350515464 0.247514529752 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19587628866 0.171178102325 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0773195876289 0.112407865282 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6012344086 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572164948454 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 52.2922748078 49.3433353143 106% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 38.8 23.0094962315 169% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.043174898 42.9750493124 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 227.0 135.714022679 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8 23.0094962315 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.689975730869 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 66.6350515464 47.7609492067 140% => OK
Elegance: 3.0 2.94281807926 102% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362341762996 0.418131533498 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.240224593918 0.181151798455 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0347579095609 0.0850326197045 41% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.804183586337 0.706616315825 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107486903849 0.157042692854 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232353227273 0.228904883108 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758671462798 0.108899403657 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.402836023459 0.367819155151 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0226121620464 0.0812612215331 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286416290978 0.316326947829 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646593205885 0.0921553760075 70% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.