The chart below gives the information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information and selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The pie chart above gives information on the ages distribution of the population in Yemen and Italy over 50 years from the year 2000 to 2050.
It is clear that the trend in both countries is the number of children from 0 -14 years becoming lesser in contrast to the increase in 60+ years group.
In the year 2000, half of the citizen in Yemen was in a group of children under 14 years old, compared to the same ages group in Italy, it took the smallest percentage. Additionally, only 3.6% was older over 60 years old in Yemen, while there were nearly a quarter of civilians in Italy. The other group from 15 - 59 years old was quite large, took 46,3% and 61,6 % respectively in Yemen and Italy.
At the point of time 2050, they predict the changes in both countries. In detail, the number of children decreases by 37% and 11.5% respectively in Yemen and Italy. The older group rise a little higher (2.1%) to 5.7%, opposite to Yemen, this part of the population in Italy has risen considerably roughly twice to 42.3%, nearly the same ratio to the working group (46.2%). Overall, the movement in Yemen tends to be more relevant than in Italy.
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes 78
- In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations 78
- The three pie charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981 1991 and 2001 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 92
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of enery in the USA since 1980 with the projection until 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52657004831 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41714418713 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2447308424 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14402356044 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675916096441 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886237761175 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114325988119 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118528000852 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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