Explain some of the way in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problem? What can individual people do?
Recently, the environment has been destroyed seriously by human activities, greenhouse gases and global warming are typical examples. Industrial dust, gases, and man-made disasters are accounted for this devastation. Therefore, governments should give some solutions to solve this problem and individuals also need to act to protect the environment.
In developed countries, the excess of CO2 gases in the air released from factories has become an important issue. Moreover, in coal exploitation industry areas, there is too much dust from the digging process to transportation, even in the burning process. Those are reasons that make the air is polluted Besides, the man-made catastrophe which is reported increasingly is not less important than industrial gases. For example, bushfire occurred in Brazil lasted for several months leading to the devastation of the Amazon rainforest or oil spill pollute the ocean and harm to marine species.
To diminish the effect of those problems on human society, governments should allow laws to protect the environment. Developed countries should make a negotiation to cut off the amount of industrial gases and give some solutions such as seek for clean, renewable sources to generate electricity instead of using coal in order to reduce a massive of dust in exploitation areas.
For individuals, raising our awareness of catastrophe, a global warming effect, obedience the law is encouraged. Also, we should do small actions like collecting litters, growing plants, draw pictures about protecting the environment topic to send meaningful messages to our community.
The environment is destroying day by day because of human action through industrial gases and dust, and artificial disasters. Governments and individuals should make an attempt to solve this global issue.
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- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which maybe unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the main information by reporting and selecting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottle Summarise the information by reporting and selecting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60507246377 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03121017742 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.102250695 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10741666803 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393018337808 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393347121065 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649955519231 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322831394836 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.