The bar chart provides us the information of how much percentage of British people, ranging in different age groups have donated money to charity in the year 1990 and 2010.
Considering the 18-25 age group more than 15 percent Britishers have donated to the charity in 1990. But in 2010 the percentage is decreased to near about 7 percent.
Taking into account the next age group which is elder than the previous one lies in the range of 26-35 years. Amongst this age group more than 30 percent people have contributed to charity in 1990 while the number decreases to near about 24 percent in 2010.
Taking into consideration the next peer group which ranges from 36-50 years, in 1990 more than 40 percent of this group have bestowed upon the charity besides in 2010 only 35 percent of this group have donated.
Considering the next generations ranging from 51-65 years only 35 percent people have offered charity in 1990. But later it increased to near about 40 percent in 2010.
Taking into account the next age group which is eldest group than the all the previous ones. Amongst them less than 35 percent people have donated in 1990. But then further rises upto 35 percent.
It is clearly evident that in 2010 till the eldeset age group there has been a stable increase in the percentage of people donating. On the contrary in the year 1990 number of people donating has fluctuated.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 46, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the eldest'.
Suggestion: is the eldest
...g into account the next age group which is eldest group than the all the previous ones. A...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, then, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30847692022 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448559670782 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6281205783 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3076923077 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260541209294 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121825344861 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952636929833 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178113806507 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103269870743 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 46, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the eldest'.
Suggestion: is the eldest
...g into account the next age group which is eldest group than the all the previous ones. A...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, then, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30847692022 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448559670782 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6281205783 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3076923077 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260541209294 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121825344861 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952636929833 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178113806507 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103269870743 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.