The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares British people of five different ages for the years 1990 and 2010 in terms of the proportion of people who give money to charity.
Overall, it is clear that a percentage of British people gave more money to charity in 1990 than they did in 2010. In addition, elder people donated more for charity than younger counterparts.
About over 15 percent of people aged from 18 to 25 years old in 1990 donated to charity, whereas around 17 percent of those in 2010 . The proportion of people who was 50 years old and below spent more money for charity in 1990 than they did in 2010. The British aged 50 and younger in 1999 spent more money on charity than those in 2010. The percentage of people between 36 and 50 years of age in 1999 was the highest during this period, which accounted for above 40 percent. By contrast, the figure for the youngest people in 2010 was the lowest, at over 5 percent.
The proportion of British people after the age of 51 years old decreased slightly their donation to charity between 1999 and 2010. The percentage of people who was 51 and above in 1999 declined by under 5 percent (35 percent of the second oldest group and about 32 percent of the oldest age group). The figure for people in the 51-65 age group was exactly 35 percent in 1999, compare d to over 30 percent of the 65 plus age group. The proportion for people between 51 years old and above in 1990 was lower than the figure for those in 2010.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ple aged from 18 to 25 years old in 1990 donated to charity, whereas around 17 pe...
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...ereas around 17 percent of those in 2010 . The proportion of people who was 50 yea...
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...re money on charity than those in 2010. The percentage of people between 36 and 50 ...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rast, the figure for the youngest people in 2010 was the lowest, at over 5 percen...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...eased slightly their donation to charity between 1999 and 2010. The percentage of...
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Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
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...out 32 percent of the oldest age group. The figure for people in the 51-65 age grou...
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...er 30 percent of the 65 plus age group. The proportion for people between 51 years ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38376383764 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20367536654 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.387453874539 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3906971153 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286115743655 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147430241777 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725121671679 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228233526392 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639133265027 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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