The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart shows us some information about the social media users in Jamestown. It tells us about the percentage of the users by age in 2018.
In general, we can see the proportion of the social media users in the following chart. It’s been divided to five scales with different colors. The highest categories are obviously the blue “13-25” (40%) and the orange “26-35” (35%). While the lowest categories are the grey “36-45”, the yellow “46-55” and the green “over 55” (18%, 10%, 2%) respectively.
Since we are talking about social media and the internet so, the highest users are definitely the teenagers and the youth. Thus, the highest rank went to the age from 13 to 25, they got two fifths. Next, the less high, it was about people between age 26 and 35 (just over a third). This clarifies that individuals from age 13 to age 35 are in much use of the social media due to their work and social experiences, and of course because it’s much easier for them to deal with technology.
In contrast, we can find that users, between 36 to 45 years old, got less than a fifth. Then, followed by the age of 46-55 (one in ten). Ultimately, in the lowest scale, came people over 55. It makes sense that the old people are less into social media, it’s way difficult to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, third, thus, while, in contrast, in general, of course, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56896551724 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44911046969 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4766787264 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7142857143 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191955866109 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724008085366 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807542028863 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13502724814 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955033506011 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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