Some people think it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Relocating large companies and industry from large urban centers to rural areas is thought by some people to be a brilliant idea. I concur that the merits will outweigh the cons.
First of all, transitioning to such a magnificent position like villages is has a plethora of merits such as, creating considerable employment opportunities in these areas that will eventually improve the condition of the resident that would be impossible, if they had only slight work opportunities only farmers work at them farmland, For example, In 2010, MGM had moved to ruler area results in cost saving against expensive rents, moreover, they brought in new products to market by diverting those funds to research and development.
Furthermore, transforming the agriculture land to industrial land is so essential to farmers and workers because, this movement will increase the price of this agriculture land, subsequently, it is very important in educational way so it will teach too many farmers a lot of manners, additionally, the workers will find a lot of materials that they will need it around them in land such as, cotton in clothes. However, moving to rural areas has a lot of disadvantages. Initially, the roads in villages are not paved of so it will be tough for workers. Moreover, workers will not have any facilities that they want to work well in these areas.
To put in nutshell, this brilliant idea should be done by government to increase the number of factories and our government will export a plethora of materials to the world and increase the level standard of people who live in rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01865671642 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93251061582 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.448260111 49.4020404114 345% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.125 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155658075963 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875854458117 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114351180028 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126800641721 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133145399795 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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