The chart below show information about enrollment in courses at an adult residential college. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information.
The below chart provides information about various content courses that students have signed up at Barkford Adult Residential College at summer of 2010.there are some intersting points that are mentioned through below paragraphs.
first of all, maximum enrollment of thirty-five percent of total students has been done for cuisine, while the philosophy and science had the lowest enrollment that were just 5 percent. It seems that those creative courses which students will learn how to create something new are more popular among students. The second maximum sign up has been done for painting and drawing which was 25 percent. Photography has the third maximum enrollment of 20 percent of total students. All these three courses (cuisine, photography and painting) are sort of innovative activities that according to presented data, people prefer to do during summer.
On the other hand, serious content such as history, philosophy and science that are academic had the lowest enrollment. The total sign up for all of them were 20 percent. In general, it seems that student wants to have more creative and pleasure activities for spending summer education vacation.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-02 | yaldaasgari | 66 | view |
| 2018-08-02 | yaldaasgari | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, third, while, in general, sort of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40217391304 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.633846153 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6561170869 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.444444444 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134234438129 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484882123789 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876997249848 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114863922762 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126630989111 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.