The chart below show the main reason for study among people of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers

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The chart below show the main reason for study among people of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

The given chart compares the percentage of two main study reasons among four groups of age and support given by employers for each group.

It is clear that most people, especially from the age of below 26 to 49, work because of their career, thereby making a significant gap between datas of these two reasons. In addition, the under 26 age group receive most support such as time off and help with fees according to the second chart.

As can be observed, the proportion of professional reasons in the under 26 years old group for study peaked at the top of the chart, at 80% while interest reason just hit a low of only 10%. This considerable difference is gradually shortened due to not only the decreasing occupational reason but also the upward trend in leisure reason, by about 13% and 10% respectively. It is also noticeable that people from 40 to 49 years old study for career and interest equally at 40%; however, when they are over 49, leisure rates rapidly rise up by 30% which is much larger than another rate at just below 20%.

Looking at the details shown in the second chart, the percentage of support that the first three groups collected by the employers drop from a high of around 62% to the lowest rank at only 42%. But when people are older, they seem to receive more support; as a result, the figure of 40-49 and over 49 age groups go up slightly, standing at approximately 38% and 44% respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, in addition, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59375 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49969480559 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.3159304508 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 5.23603664747 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388472073481 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16154978934 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914008043193 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24029257035 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878576889038 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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