the chart below show that UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go in to full- time work did after leaving college in 2008 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...r they graduated if they did not do the full time job. It can obviously seen that furth...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
... seen that further study had chosen the most of students including bachelor and master. In contr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...he highest number. The students who had part time job or were unemployment, were nearly t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'refer'
Suggestion: refer
... same as graduated students, they would referred to take ' further study'. whi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...red to take ' further study'. which are the highest number, with 2,725 stud...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...st number, with 2,725 students. Moreover,' part time work' is the one of the...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...r, with 2,725 students. Moreover,' part time work' is the one of the popular ch...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lower than'?
Suggestion: lower than
...ne of the popular chose which were just lower then ' further study students, with 1,6...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...the popular chose which were just lower then ' further study students, with 1,6...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, then, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31901840491 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67115747172 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7893965402 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145444046642 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693177220768 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709260556767 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116642443292 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822964246556 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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