The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and maoe comparisons where relevant

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The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and maoe comparisons where relevant.

The graph demonstrates the destinations for UK post graduates and gmfratudes who preferred not to stop into full-time work after leaving college.
Overall, it shows what these students did or spent their time when they left college.
To begin with postgraduate, the highest number of students pursued their further students accounting for 2,725 whereas the lowest of all I.e.e 345 students preferred doing voluntary work after leaving college. Students also preferred doing part time work accounting for 2,535 which was slightly less than those opting to do further studies. Out of all, there were 1625 students who chose not to do anything ans stayed unemployed.

Subsequently, looking at the UK graduates, Out of 30000 students; 29,665 commencing to more than 90% of students wanted to pursue their further studies. Number of graduates choosing part time work is almost equivalent to those opting for unemployment. The lowest of all in both the cases was voluntary work which was selected by 3500 students.

To conclude, the students of both categories focus on studying further and pursue education more than anything else.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... college. Students also preferred doing part time work accounting for 2,535 which was sli...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...r studies. Number of graduates choosing part time work is almost equivalent to those opti...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to part'
Suggestion: to part
...r studies. Number of graduates choosing part time work is almost equivalent to those...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, whereas, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35195530726 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69655956282 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1976665308 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.444444444 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210099043376 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934453174206 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660551647621 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129536529678 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716328816089 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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