The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The chart compares male and female employees from five different types of jobs in terms of the hours they spend weekly in their leisure between 1988 and 1989.
Overall, it is clear that male employees enjoyed more free time than their female counterparts. Moreover, there were no males working at home or doing any part-time jobs.
As the graph shows, unemployed males had the highest opportunity to spend their time in leisure and the figure is approximately 85 hours in a week. Regarding retired persons, they spent almost the same amount of time as unemployed citizens. Conversely, employed males enjoyed only 50 hours of free time in each week.
By contrast, females, regardless of their job status, got fewer hours of spare time compared with their male counterparts. It is evident from the graph that unemployed and retired women were given only 78 hours of leisure time weekly, whereas a housewife could manage more than 50 hours of free time. However, a full-time female worker had only about 40 hours in each week for refreshments and, for part-time female workers, it was just a little bit more than 40 hours in a seven day period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 439, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...part-time female workers, it was just a little bit more than 40 hours in a seven day perio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88205128205 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51973929754 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574358974359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6309476528 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197298851862 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909144311668 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328295813537 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122679709053 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294347585943 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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