The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain The graph shows the trends in the consumption of fast foods Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain. The graph shows the trends in the consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The given bar charts illustrate how much money was spent on three fast-food types per week in Britain while line charts reveal consumption of fast foods from 1970to 1990. Overall, it can be seen that the majority of money spent on fast foods was on hamburgers by all three groups while usage of fish and chips and hamburger went on an upward trend while pizza on the downward.

For hamburgers, 40 money was spent by the high-income group, which was the highest, followed by 30 on average income. Low income spent was half than it was by average income group. For fish &chips, low and high-income spending was identically same on account of 16 while it was 25 by average income group. For pizza, only five amount of money spends by low income, which was half what it was by the average income group. The high-income group had 17 amounts of spending.

In 1970, pizza usage was on the peak at 300, which declined later whereas fish & chips and hamburger had below 90 which grew later. After a decade, pizza and fish&chips were the same usages, 200. Afterwards, the former consumption did not change and ended at 200 in 1990. The latter one shot up steadily and touched its zenith in 1990 with maximum500. Over two decades, hamburger consumption was parallel to fish and chips, from 30 to 300.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2022-10-25 dangcongkhai10082005 78 view
2022-10-25 dangcongkhai10082005 56 view
2022-10-25 dangcongkhai10082005 78 view
2021-12-17 Sukh-73 78 view
2020-09-26 pris 11 view
Essays by user dangcongkhai10082005 :

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'amount' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'amounts'.
Suggestion: amounts
...rage income group. For pizza, only five amount of money spends by low income, which wa...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67248908297 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38218022171 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563318777293 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8280666051 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16473094589 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626537425045 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861048780956 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125466088443 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111789420274 0.0819641961636 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.