The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Line-height
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d such as hamburger, fish & chips, pizza are paid by people depend on their incom...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'consumed the highest'.
Suggestion: consumed the highest
...end on their income. With hamburger are consumed highest by the person who has high and average ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: About
...th all of type income in the bar chart. about the line graph, during 1970 and 1990 pe...
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Suggestion: Line-height
..., it gradually decreased in 1990. line-height:107%'>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45126430257 2.65546596893 130% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694214876033 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 171.9 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6478419036 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.4 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168837339247 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908430222644 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115582814505 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892557985489 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892557985489 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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