Parental responsibilities are equal among fathers as well as mothers although the mother has an appreciated effort in raising her babies from birth passing through all age levels and that may give her the right whether to have babies or not.
Fatherhood is a great sacrifice example like the Unknown Soldier in the fiercest battles, the soldier who sacrifice his life for nothing but his country and the history attribute the victory to the kings at last, father is the one who spend his whole life outside home trying to get the money to improve his family life, educate his children in a way better that he had, to get them what he deprived from when he was their age.
Also the mother who spent her life for her babies, she loves them for no reason but they are her children, she can spend her night up looking after her crying baby with no twitch, she may spend the night praying for him to be better and to be a great man in the future forgetting herself, what a wonderful sensation the god put inside these two souls the father and the mother.
Fatherhood and motherhood are two inseparable things, the both complete each other to bring up their children in the right way even better than themselves so on talking about the decision of having children we find out that it is one of the common decisions that no one can take solely but the parents together because they are sharing their life for a third soul which is their baby.
- Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or 61
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. 67
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.» You should write at least 150 wor 11
- the table below shows the consumer durables owned in Britain 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e deprived from when he was their age. Also the mother who spent her life for her b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, third, well, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50763358779 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27939301984 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 22.4926829268 289% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7938929993 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 295.25 112.824112599 262% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 22.9334400587 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 5.23603664747 325% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0325869270771 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.017353009391 0.103423049105 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0130115152391 0.0843802449381 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.017353009391 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130115152391 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 13.2329268293 246% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 61.2550243902 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 10.3012195122 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.77 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.9970731707 255% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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