The bar chart provides information about six commodities that people of four countries: Germany, Italy, France and Britain paid money for buying them. As bar chart illustrates, it is obvious that British are in the first stage of spending money for six mentioned goods. They spent 155 thousand pounds for personal stereos and tennis racquets, 160 thousands of pounds for perfumes and more than 160 thousand of pounds for CDs, toys and photographic film. Germany for example, has almost constant payment for all kind of goods, around 145-155 thousands of pounds.
As it can be seen, Italy has almost the same payment regulation in all kind of commodities and ranges from 145-155 thousands of pounds.
France on the other hand, has an oscillation in spending money for goods in the contrary o Germany and Italy. People of France spend almost the same money for the 3 first commodities and then have an increase in expense of two other goods. Furthermore they spend an immense expense for buying photographic film.
- The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 11
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries 73
- the bar charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing coutries and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '160 thousand'.
Suggestion: 160 thousand
...r personal stereos and tennis racquets, 160 thousands of pounds for perfumes and more than 160 t...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ncrease in expense of two other goods. Furthermore they spend an immense expense for buyin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, then, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02366863905 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56501880155 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544378698225 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9222816105 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133359591821 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659469413467 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495417523905 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073604363056 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678989138223 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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