There are two kinds of works for children. The first one is child labor and the second one is a kind of work that children do by their own agreements and they really enjoy doing this kind of works. I would say that I really disagree with child laboring but working for learning some skills can help children and prepare them for their future life.
Child labor is very common in developing countries.There are children spending all the time for covering their families’ daily expenses and working stop-less for days and nights. Furthermore bosses don't have appropriate behavior with them and these bad behavior would affect their personal life and they lose their self esteem. Because of poverty they could not be able to pass their school years as same as other children and by this way their future would spoil.
On the other hand, nowadays there are huge number of wealthy families encouraging their children for learning skills and experiences by engaging in paid works. For example David Beckham's son is from a wealthy family, but he works for getting experiences for his future life. Another example is about families that they have farm, gallery, store, to name but a few, but they want to their children help them in their free times and of course they pay money for their children. By paying money, children have more motivation for helping and besides, they really would learn managing a work, earning experiences and patient, problem handling and many things.
All in all, as far as I'm concerned, participating children in paid works especially in their free time and without any labor and force is very helpful for their future life and it would help them to have a well-rounded personality in society. But child laboring makes children lose their self confidence and have harmful behavior in the future life. I think, government especially in developing countries should devote money for helping children and pay money for their family’s expenses and their education to prepare them for a great job positions when they would grow up.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, well, for example, i think, kind of, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98843930636 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51159228912 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494219653179 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9023894767 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.769230769 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188261009279 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101961230818 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672554581302 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142657337506 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620638425235 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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