The given chart illustrates the amount of spending time in two aspects including chatting on the Internet and playing on games console of from 10 to 15 years old.
Overall, model's survey consisted of boys and girls. Beside, there are three levels using time (less than an hour, 1 to 3 hours and 4 hours plus). Obviously, the surveyees in both activites tended to spending their time approximate 1 hours or more.
Firstly, both gender have equal time in 'less than an hour' area. But, '1 to 3 hours' female interviewees were higher than the other interviewees about 10%. And, the same phenomenon also happened with the groups that they usually used Internet 4 hours plus.
Secondly,the figure of playing on games console are much more distinct between boys and girls. Most boys spent from 1 to 3 hours to play games about 45%. By contrast, girl prefered using less than an hours to spending more than 1 hours in playing games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ess than an hour area. But, 1 to 3 hours female interviewees were higher than the...
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...ppened with the groups that they usually used Internet 4 hours plus. Secondly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73456790123 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43220059948 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6614227575 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245171995106 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104904194105 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136229535606 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197873045704 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178570391233 0.0819641961636 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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