Nowaday,a lot of people think that the figure of health problems is increasing dramatically as a consequence of eating too much convenient food, especially fast food. So, their view of point is necessary for government to raise a higher tax on these food. In my opinion, I totally disagree.
Human life becomes more and more busier day-by-day, they don't have enough time for preparing a home-cooking meal. In fact, many people are willing to buy a burger or sandwich. I agree that fast food always contains much fat, salt and cheese but it's not mean people can blame for them to lead some health problems. For example, an adult eat one or two fast food a week or a month. Compare that adult with the person who eat these food daily. I believe the result is definitely different. Because our body requires balance diet including meat, fish, vegetable, fruit,... But I think we can't guarantee full nutrituos food after a hard-working and exhausted day. Beside, at weekend, many families enjoy taking their children to KFC, Mc Donald or some kind of places like that. And, in order to improve health, people can do some work out to keep fit and help them stronger.
On the other hand, I want to discuss about influence of higher tax. Authority put pressure on the businessman, who sell fast food due to rising price so many customer may give up this convenient meal. For example, the children in poor families can't have the change to try this kind of food due to expensive price including higher tax.
To sum up, the main factor depend on people who make their own choice about what they will eat and how many time
they will eat them in a week/month/year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
Nowaday,a lot of people think that the figure of ...
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Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...for government to raise a higher tax on these food. In my opinion, I totally disagree. ...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'busier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: busier
...sagree. Human life becomes more and more busier day-by-day, they dont have enough time ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s more and more busier day-by-day, they dont have enough time for preparing a home-c...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...pare that adult with the person who eat these food daily. I believe the result is definite...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...t including meat, fish, vegetable, fruit,... But I think we cant guarantee full nu...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...sh, vegetable, fruit,... But I think we cant guarantee full nutrituos food after a h...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... example, the children in poor families cant have the change to try this kind of foo...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...choice about what they will eat and how many time they will eat them in a week/month/ye...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out what they will eat and how many time they will eat them in a week/month/year....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, i think, in fact, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67918088737 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52238519107 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621160409556 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8934035764 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6470588235 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345957066049 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969058161254 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821938311764 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166261333912 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111602836656 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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