The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
The visual reveals the information regarding how many vhs, dvd, Blu-ray were annually sold and rented from a specific store between 2002 and 2011.
In general, these data sources markedly communicate that there was a decrease in vhs sales and rentals, with the number of rentals witnessing the higher dramatic rise, while the figure for Blu-ray sales consistently had almost the lowest figure over the period. Meanwhile, the dvd sales showed some fluctuates, yet, remained stable for several years.
As is observed from the given line graphs, to begin with, reaching a high of approximately 185,000 in 2002, the quantity of rentals continued a stable decline with a slight acceleration before ending the period at roughly 60,000. In a similar fashion, vhs sales were the second major in 2002, with a subsequent dramatic lull until 2006, these items hit a trough of 0 to the 5 following years.
Blu-ray sales are negatively correlated as they started to experience a gradual rise from 0 to nearly 15,000 in 2007 and 2011, respectively. A more substantial shift in weighting occurred in the figure for dvd products. these objects abruptly surged from just about 50,000 to successfully peak at more than 200,000 in 5 years’ time. However, after that, it fell from the highest point and ended the duration at 180,000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar fashion" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...re ending the period at roughly 60,000. In a similar fashion, vhs sales were the second major in 200...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ccurred in the figure for dvd products. these objects abruptly surged from just about...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, second, so, while, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07798165138 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6586239466 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655963302752 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5593270997 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197504164484 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751896102416 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547610676197 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122879018013 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489129058807 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.