The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales of films in a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
The statistics detail how many rentals and sales were sold annually from different kinds of films of the store at 1-year intervals over a period of 9 years, commencing from 2002.
In general, while the number of rentals moved downwards, the pattern for DVD Sales had a significant increase despite some alterations throughout the timeline.
As far as the first year of the surveyed stint is concerned, approximately 180,000 rentals were temporarily lived, making it the highest rental. Moreover, the number of VHS sales was twofold as much as that of DVD sales, at respective figures being nearly 80,000 and 40,000.
Thereafter, the figure for DVD sales rose to reach a peak of approaching 213,000 in the sixth interval, which was followed by a slight decline to the most popular about 175,000 at the end of the period in 2011. The advent of Blu-ray sales whose figure fall within a range from 5000 to 12, 000 with regard to the rentals and sales. Finally, the proportion of Rentals was recorded at the same time, which witness a considerable decline of more than threefold compared to the initial figure to acuminate the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, so, while, in general, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91145833333 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63168275506 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.674423812 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.714285714 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192955077387 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876367959276 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522365491816 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122613826606 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482589906582 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.