the chart below shows the annual pay for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004

The bar chart compares seven nations in terms of the yearly pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers by 2004.

Overall, Doctor was the most paid job in seven countries. It can be seen that, in The US, the figures for the salary of Doctors and Other workers were higher than that of regardless of nations.

As you can see from the chart, Doctors working in The US received 20.000 USD, 2 times as much as that of Doctors in Italy. The second highest income was 70 thousand US dollars, which was paid yearly for Doctors in Switzerland and France. In addition, the annual pay of Doctors in Germany and Czech were around 65.000 USD while that of Doctors working in Finland received the lowest yearly wage (about 50.000 US dollars) in comparison with people in their lines of work living in other nations.

Looking at the chart in more detail, around 45.000 USD per year, Other workers working in The US earned the top income on their fields compared with workers in other countries. Additionally, the figures for the income of Other workers in Finland and France are quite equal, from 25.000 to 30.000 USD. Meanwhile, the annual earnings of Other workers in Switzerland, which stood at 40.000 USD, was 2 times as much as that of Workers working in Germany, Czech and Italy.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, second, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72222222222 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31510480889 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452991452991 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1182288847 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260278181866 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139209914629 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955569765407 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229842743748 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108289689305 0.0819641961636 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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