The bar chart shows data about the most usual sports in UK by 2008.
Overall, Soccer was the most common sports to men and most of British women choose Netball. It also can be seen that the widest disparity was between the figures for both genders playing Netball.
As you can see from the chart, the proportion of males playing Soccer stood at 22%, compared with only 5% for females. At 9% and 20%, the figures for males playing Table Tennis and Other respectively were 2 times as much as that of their female counterparts. Similarly, the percentage of males who played Cricket was 10% while the figure for females stood at only 1%. In addition, there were equal figures of both sexes playing Tennis and Basketball, around 7%.
Looking at the chart in more detail, around 25% of females took part in Netball, which was substantially higher than males' participation, at only 2%. Similarly, the percentage of females who enjoyed Swimming (about 23%) was higher that that of males (about 14%). Additionally, females accounted for over 4% of participation in Jogging while their counterparts made up under 2.5%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for females. At 9% and 20%, the figures for males playing Table Tennis and Other...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...o enjoyed Swimming about 23% was higher that that of males about 14%. Additionally, femal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, similarly, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89417989418 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60095832011 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5213232293 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208848859284 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975447946773 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113858832934 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176399402577 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136088068316 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.