The chart below shows the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrient, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The given pie-charts demonstrates various nutrient present in all three meals throughout the day in percentage in USA. Consequently, over-consumption of this three nutrients such as sodium, saturated fat and added sugar can have detrimental effects on health.
Firstly, sodium and saturated fat is the most consumed nutrient during the dinner which is 43% and 37% respectively. Apart from that, during breakfast, sodium and saturated fat are almost similar in consumption which is 29% and 26%. Whereas, sodium eaten in snacks and breakfast is similar to each other that is 14%. Furthermore, saturated fat consumed in snacks and breakfast is 21% and 16% respectively.
Sugar is the most eatable nutrient in snacks, which is almost 42%. Moreover, sugar eaten in lunch(19%) and breakfast(16%) surpasses the sugar eaten in dinner(23%).
To summarize, Sodium(43%) and saturated fat(37%) is the most consumed nutrient in dinner, whereas sugar(42%) is most consumed in evening snacks.
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- A large amount of advertisements nowadays are now targeted at children Many people say this has negative effects on children and should therefore be banned to what extent do you agree or disagree 85
- he table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002.Summarize information and make comparison which relevant. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02273606743 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0693442647 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155569352457 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707604079534 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639871787376 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962848272534 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626767565668 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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