Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Tourism throughout the world is increasing significantly. Travelling all over the globe creates a keen sense of headache, amongst the people of various culture, instead of showing mutual agreement. However, I disagree with this opinion that global tourism creates conflict between local culture and foreign tourists.
International tourism is the most important way to increase fame of the country. The importance of tourism should be valued by the people. Despite of some people who cheats the foreign traveler by taking extravagant fares, there are also people who give them roof to stay without any charges.By showing such understanding, people will get to know about the kindness and culture of the country. Consequently, it is also befitted in terms of safety for the tourist will increase every year.
Admittedly, there are myriad reasons to show understanding between people of different cultures.some people are offended by the people who wear shoes in holy places such as temple. For instance, hindu culture does not allow shoes shoes inside the temple, whereas people who go to church wear their shoes. Therefore, everyone has different culture, and people should understand the values and beliefs behind that.Instead of arguing people should peacefully understand the culture and also make them understand about our culture
In conclusion,despite of some people who believes that tourism is headache, it gives great benefit to the country in every aspect by just at a price of understanding various culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47257383966 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89675891895 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.981357536 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.7 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227204975692 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989489125937 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697211237603 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137948666723 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550521725625 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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