Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
In today's modern era, population is burgeoning at an alarming rate. Varieties of food and snacks are increasing day by day and so people are eating unhealthy food, which leads them to the path of obesity. Many pupils are not as healthy as compared to the past. In this essay, I intend to analyse the problems affecting the situations and suggest some ways to ameliorate them.
There are many reasons why people in today's world are not as healthy as they used to be. Firstly, in early days there had been limited resources for food and every day people used to eat same food which bored them. So, people started developing the taste buds by mixing one food with another or by increasing the usage of ingredients to make it spicy. Moreover, with the lapse of time, varieties of dishes where available in the market. Despite of knowing that unhealthy nutritional value, still people continued eating high calorific food eating this junk food and dishes are the main cause of increasing obesity.
However, one cannot undone what is already done but can take care after knowing the detrimental effect it has on health. First of all eating is not the problem but having right choice about food is the solution. Increasing taste buds should be controlled by people to stay healthy. Furthermore, people should avoid consuming junk food every day and instead can eat once in a week to satisfied their urge. Continuing consumption of unhealthy food leads to disease and in some cases also deaths. So people should consider their health as priority.
In conclusion number of increasing junk food and taste buds among people are inextricable. Whether it should avoid it or consume it is on their own. Controlling your taste-bud is the most effective method to avoid this unhealthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98349834983 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52214753772 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7461712021 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140697524155 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045484465271 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413366099259 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894095769739 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222047431387 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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