A glance at the provided line graph illustrates the information about the trend of three categories of crime in three different area in Manchester city centre from 2003-2012. In general, it is clearly apparent that Burglary had significant downside pattern while car theft showed the opposite and robbery remained unchanged during the period.
Looking in more detail from the chart, in 2003, the number of burglary reported at near 3,500 cases marked as the highest crime compared to car theft and robbery. The figures reached the peak in 2004 at around 3,750 before it dropped significantly years by years to the lowest point at above 1,000 in 2008. In the next four years, the trend of burglary started to rise again by 500 cases on average placed it as the second rank crime in 2012. In opposite, car theft which reported as the second frequently happened crime in 2003 at 2,250 showed a slightly decline in 2006 by 250 cases and began to climb gradually at approximately 2,800 incidents in 2012 marked it as the highest category of crime in 2012. Finally, the trend of robbery showed a small fluctuation which reported only between 500 to below 1,000 cases during the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
... happened crime in 2003 at 2,250 showed a slightly decline in 2006 by 250 cases and began to climb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, second, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85643564356 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50307623695 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1048254542 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.142857143 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300267669101 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131387080756 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140688890765 0.0843802449381 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261130755173 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943262000695 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.