The chart below shows the expenditure on 3 categories with proportions among residents in the UK in 2004

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The chart below shows the expenditure on 3 categories with proportions among residents in the UK in 2004

The column chart illustrates the changes and differences in the proportions of the expenditure of citizens in the UK provided by five age groups in three elements in 2004. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the percentage of Food and Drink is directly proportional to the age.
In particular, when it comes to Food & Drink, the percentage of expenditure gradually increased from the lowest number at 6% to the highest percentage at 23% in the under 30- over 75 year-old group.
In terms of Restaurant, the percentage of under 30 years old was at 14%, which was the highest score, followed by the stability of 12% in 30-75 years old. It was accompanied by over 75 years old at 7%, which was just half in comparison with the highest percentage.
Meanwhile, concerning Entertainment, the top position was at 23% in 60-75 year-old group. The second and third largest proportion were 14%, 13%, which was represented by 45-60 and over 75 year-old group respectively. Besides, under 30-45 years old accounted for the smallest percentages at approximately 7%.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, so, third, while, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97206703911 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99833287011 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564245810056 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6802058337 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825941002615 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483979644277 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730081898762 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660047280791 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753871954357 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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