The chart compares the outlay among five age groups living in the United Kingdom on three different categories in 2004. The figures deliver data as the proportion of their total spending.
Overall, funds spent on food and drinks is directly proportional to the age. This area holds largest proportions in most of age groups. Older people spend more on two sectors (food and drink, restaurant and hotel) and entertainment holds minimal importance in their lives.
It is seen that consumers under 30s spend least amount of their money on food and drink (close to 6%) where as their expenditure on Restaurant and Hotel accounts for 13%, which is highest among all. The later is least popular in people over 61, where age group 61-75 accounts for roughly 2% and 76+ contributes to nearly 7%. Restaurant and Hotel are equally popular in people from 31 to 60 which is slightly above one tenth.
Probing further, the field of entertainment is well liked by the individuals between 61-75, which constitutes for roughly 22% of their spending which declines to about 13% in the people who are 75+. This sector is equally popular among folks till the age of 60 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'holds the largest'.
Suggestion: holds the largest
...ctly proportional to the age. This area holds largest proportions in most of age groups. Olde...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spend the least'.
Suggestion: spend the least
... It is seen that consumers under 30s spend least amount of their money on food and drink...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...eir money on food and drink close to 6% where as their expenditure on Restaurant and Hot...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ich declines to about 13% in the people who are 75+. This sector is equally popular amo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89898989899 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49515396046 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60101010101 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4313947765 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113880915229 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530555919403 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779113480814 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089750627789 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988951977729 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.