The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph elucidates which age group spend the highest money on different things food and drinks restaurant and hotel and entertainment in the year 2004 in the UK.
Overall, it can be manifested that the highest proportion of spent money on food and drink and entertainment. However senior citizens did not interested ate food at restaurants and hotels in the UK in the year 2004.
To begin with, the highest proportion of spent money on food and drink in the all age groups, except for under 30 it was 6 percent only. But 61-75 and over 76 age groups spent the highest money on food and drinks. which was 20 and 23percent respectively. The 31-41 and 46- 60 age groups spent which was 13 percent for the former one, and it 17percent for the latter one.
Moreover, the under the 30s mostly spent money on restaurant and Hotel it was 14 percent .whereas, the least 61-75 and over the 76 age groups spent on 2 and 7 percent respectively. The age groups 31-45 and 46 to 60 spent on 14percent similarly it can be observed. In contrast, the age group 61-75 spent the highest money on entertainment. which was 24percent also under the 30s and 45 age groups spent approximately 6 percent. But the age groups 46-60 and over the 76 spent money similarly it was 14 percent in the year 2004.
- The bar graph below shows the percentage of adults according to age and gender who do not any do physical activity in Australia
- The bar graph below shows the percentage of adults according to age and gender who do not any do physical activity in Australia
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- prevention is better than cure out of a country s health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...inment. However senior citizens did not interested ate food at restaurants and hotels in t...
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Suggestion: Which
...t the highest money on food and drinks. which was 20 and 23percent respectively. The ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as 13 percent for the former one, and it 17percent for the latter one. Moreover...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt for the former one, and it 17percent for the latter one. Moreover, the under...
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Suggestion: .
...n restaurant and Hotel it was 14 percent .whereas, the least 61-75 and over the 76...
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Suggestion: Which
...ent the highest money on entertainment. which was 24percent also under the 30s and 45...
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...tely 6 percent. But the age groups 46-60 and over the 76 spent money similarly it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, whereas, except for, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52360515021 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60426270492 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416309012876 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1815836934 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108638328499 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568683689384 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366948145054 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836285632833 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362755696193 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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