The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories with different proportions among residents in the UK

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The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories with different proportions among residents in the UK

The bar chart gives information about the percentage of British spending on three different categories, namely food and drink, restaurant and hotel, and entertainment.
Overall, the residents under 30 years old spend most on restaurant and hotel while food and drink are preferable items for those between 30 and 75 or above.
Looking into more details, the under 30 age group uses approximately 0.14% of their total spending on restaurant and hotel, followed by around 0.1% for both people among 30 to 60 years of age. In comparison, British residents between 60 and 75 and over 75 allocate a small amount of their budget on this category, at about 0.06% and 0.04% respectively.
Regarding food and drink, there is an increasing proportion of expenditure on these item when people get older. Specially, those who over 75 years old pay more than 0.2% to buy food and drink, which was relatively higher than the figures for the other groups.
A similar pattern can be seen when it comes to entertainment which accounts for over 0.2% of the total spending of the 60-to-75 age group. However, people tend to lose interest in entertainment when they are older than 75, at nearly 0.12%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71438759207 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.909451804 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0772069893909 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372519024948 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411671198942 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479395067357 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391082871505 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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