The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

The bar chart illustrate the countries who was consume a good things people was spent up in five good holdings and expenditure in france and UK.

Overall, the UK spent giant amount on cars. Although the least amount was UK the least holding is perfume. On the other hand, france have significant holdings gradually going down in all good thing. However, cameras was slight in the france country. And in UK was a perpendicular in all good things.

In term of cars, individuals spent lot of their money. As i see that, in cars people spend about 450,000 pounds in UK. However computers is less than cars, cars was exact 350,000 pound in UK. But in books its modest around 50,000 pound compare to computers.

Conversely, perfume was too decreasing item and minimum in both countries.on the other hand,cameras was also tiniest in france its 50,000 pound tiny compared to perfume

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
... chart illustrate the countries who was consume a good things people was spent up in fi...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...all, the UK spent giant amount on cars. Although the least amount was UK the least holdi...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ndividuals spent lot of their money. As i see that, in cars people spend about 45...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...eople spend about 450,000 pounds in UK. However computers is less than cars, cars was e...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cameras
...imum in both countries.on the other hand,cameras was also tiniest in france its 50,000 p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, so, as to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8940397351 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55838366148 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0060389476 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1818181818 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0935227537301 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361322251347 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785569973628 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792800221025 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112938447414 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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